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Question: Is this any good!?!?!?!?!?
I press my hand onto yours,
I feel like I’d rather do my chores
You say we can’t be together
Then I wish time would fade!.
Where things are forgotten,
To lay there and start to rotten!.

Finally I look into your eyes,
Knowing you’re filled with lies!.
I ask why I even loved you,
But deep inside I knew
I saw my future when I looked at you,
I wanted you to make my dreams come true!.

I get up and say,
“Why don’t you just go away!?”
I now realize, that everything about you was only a disguise!.
And that I was just your small little prize

I say “Goodbye!.”
And begin to sigh!.
Not because I am sad,
But because I am glad!.
And now you look at me and want to explain
Your doing nothing except making me insane
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BRILLIANT!! if i were you, i'd start writing songs!! keep up the great work!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is how I felt in December 2006!. Nice poem!. Keep writing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com