What say you to "Sounds of Life"?

Question: What say you to "Sounds of Life"!?

Sounds of Life

Morning revelry is not silent at all
outside my doors sound explodes
early birds chirping, dogs yapping at sun
cars busily going to and fro
even in not so distant track
is hurried train's whistle
charging ahead in its course
the pulse of life sounds
greeting the day

back into my house I go
and when the door is shut
the only sound I hear
within these lonely
four walls
is a
flatline------------------------!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

How can you flatline!? You bring so much life here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know - I just heard (and felt) that sound recently!. I had gone outside (to check the mail) - went I returned inside the house - and shut the door - I felt an overwhelming sense of emptiness!. It was horrible!. I checked - my dog was not in the house - I opened the front door - and there she was - waiting for me!. What an empty house this is - without her!. I did not realize - how much her essence - fills the presence here - until now ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like nature's sounds lets you know your life is not over, but once inside all alone, it feels like death!. But it seems more that the morning lets u know that life isn't over, but the feeling inside your heart, inside your home makes you feel as if all is not worth living for!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is cool!. I'm so happy i can go somewhere where i can see people that loves poetry!. Check this site out for props!. http://starfox-poems!.blogspot!.com/2008_0!.!.!. I know its i long blog but I'm sure you'll be educated!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey! I ain't dead yet!. I may be kickin low and breathin shallow, but I am kickin and breathin!. You have a phone number for someone who cares, use it if the line gets too flat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Listen carefully!.!.!. your server is working!. Hear the hum !?

Nothing's really dead until we are!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To Be or Not To BE
TO HAVE OR NOT TO HAVE
WHY CHOOSE the UNCHOOSEN
TO BE ALIVE OR NOT BE
TO PAY OR NOT
Why must I be if I cannot bee
What reason for this
or maybe no reason at all
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Nothing like a little happy Sunday morning poem!.!.!.lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

whoa!.!.!.a flatline!? really!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

""All the lonely people, where do they all come from"
a Tony Bennett oldie
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Flatline!.

Ma!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

a shinning star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You aren't alone!. Your words brought me right into your home!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I too am a poet and love poetry!.!.!.!.!.This was BRILLIANT!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Hope to hear more :)Www@QuestionHome@Com