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Question: Please rate poem and tell me what you think!?:)!?
Gamut-
I stretch out in space,
my body extended,
to the feel the embrace
of every neuron bended
into the surplus
of buried energy!.
Adorning my carnal
and crumbling body,
the embrace
suddenly releases,
and I crumble back
into clinging pieces!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
To me this poem talks about being completely at peace with yourself and the world, even when your frightfully unstable and broken!. and you cling to those moments of peace that hold you together, because you fall to pieces again without them!.

does that make sense!? ah well,

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