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Question: A short poem inspired by Coop366!?
Why torment my heart!?
Is a dungeon not dark enough
for one to feed on memories that imitate misery!?
Who will hear the call of my heart
when the cell is closed, and it's key forgotten!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


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I like!. Maybe if you want to shorten further

'feed on memories that imitate misery'

'when cell is closed, key forgotten'Www@QuestionHome@Com

I did not know of the torment of my heart shown!. She did me wrong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

only the lonelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is real good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

uh!.!.!. how poetic!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Semper with very little!.!.!. you said much!
Well done!



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