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Question: How often do you take stock of your life!?
"I've no comfort in waiting!."
"Bleed a bit first!. For me!."
"I will not!. Nothing I have done is for you!."
"I can make the birds sound like dying children!."
"I will not hear them!."
"I can turn the wind black!."
"I will face the sky!."
A blade of grass between his teeth, a twisted finger spins it on his lip!.
"This is my canon!."
"It is yours to own, then!."
The space between them shifts and their shadows become one!. A crow sweeps it's wing over a rotted tree branch and returns to the horizon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Sounded like Satan on the Buk show, but without the humorous ending!. Deep !. !. !. (thank God halloween only comes once a year!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Deeply dark and haunting in tone, your words set the stage and scene, including smoke rising from the floor all in conversation, with the eerie visual of the crow returning to the horizon, whose wings I heard!.
Your head must hurt after an effort like this!
Hugs, maWww@QuestionHome@Com
Years ago my sponsor asked me to take stock AND inventory of my life!. I never got to share it with him as he slipped, went on a bender,
and was never heard from again!. I saw him a few years later, sleeping on a subway bench!. He had no idea who I was!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
"This is my canon!."
"It is yours to own, then!."
I have learned to expect such deepness on a Sunday morning!.!.!.not a Saturday!. The only comment I may make is!.!.
sigh!.
Taking stock!.!. hard to see through the 'black wind'Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have made many pots of soup!.
Fed it all to others, forgetting to save myself a bowl!.
I hear everything you say!. Everytime you say, "Soup's on!.!"Www@QuestionHome@Com
scary time for me to take stock of my life!. i do like the way you put it!. i best try looking over my life so i won't miss anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Amazing, as usual!.
To answer the Q: Each night!. Reminds me I am, if nothing else, tenacious!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fascinating format!. You get more and more creative!. Your book will be unique!.
EDIT: 'it's' = it is; 'its' = belonging to 'it!.' (Sorry, you may blame TD)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Every Day!. I am very fortunate for what I have!.
The puzzle is ALMOST Complete!. ALMOST !!!!
(Awesome Poem) !!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not often enough! My stocks of my life are crashing down all over this damn town! As the crow sweeps down and shites on my head!Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's the perfect compliment to a vodka and Smarties hangover!. Thank you!Www@QuestionHome@Com
DailyWww@QuestionHome@Com
Well, someone is being possessed this Halloween!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
That was beautiful!. WowWww@QuestionHome@Com
Was "Devil Went Down To Georgia" playing in the background!?
Niiiiiiiice!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love the 'video' i get in my mind when i read thisWww@QuestionHome@Com
And the point!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not as often as I shouldWww@QuestionHome@Com
arrggg !.!.!. I feel like going back to bed !.!.!. or watch my favorite comedy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
daily!.!.thanks !.!.great poem!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com