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Question: I wrote this poem after my girlfriends deb!?
He walked into the room
Stopped in his step
Couldn’t believe what his eyes could see
More beautiful then
Any girl who’s ever been

He’s the guy she loves
He knows how to make her laugh
Never failing to cheer her up
They found their love cold and wet
By the drink taps at a rock show

Stay up late on the internet
talking to each other
30 minutes far by car
Waiting for every weekend
Madly missing you and me

She walks down those stairs
Blinding in her white dress
Beautiful like no other princess
Mesmerized in glistening eyes
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I'd do you if you wrote this for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it very much!. I think its very creative and relates very much!. Great job!. I think the ending could be better!. But I have to say I really enjoyed it and it kept my attention!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its all **** for **** sake every poem you do is ****
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THATS AWSOME!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

pass the bucket!.!.!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

if i was deb i would be all over uWww@QuestionHome@Com