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Question: Do your neighbors awaken you in the early morn!?
Old woman in tattered robe knelt by her rose bed, surrounded by the dark of predawn, crying!. I heard her tears every morning!. As the light of day came upon her, I saw her wipe them from her face!. She gathered the fallen rose petals around her, feeling just as withered and spent as they!.

In her gentle digging, sensitive tips from her age-spotted hands felt it and her eyes beheld!. Like a crystal prism catches light, it sparkled as she lifted it to the full morning sun!. I watched as though a meteor had landed in the very place she now stood!.

Yet she did not blink as blinding shafts radiated from this newly found treasure!. She turned to me and asked, "I've not seen light such as this, pray tell me, what do I hold in my hands!?"

"My child," I spoke, "I have heard you all these mornings, on bended knee as you've cried!. Your tears I have counted and collected as they've fallen, then compressed like coal!. What you hold is your own Hope Diamond!. I cannot bear to see you in such darkness for even one more day!."

"I shall carry this beacon of hope with me always, but on bended knee you'll still find me, here, before the day begins," she vowed!.

I had no doubt of that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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magnificent,,, just simply magnificentWww@QuestionHome@Com

very romantic moment yet painful when some one is in love from one side as the one sided love is hopeless yet sincere
keep writing your words are creative !.!. would you please check mine i would really appreciate ithttp://uk!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

reality and hope, and the battles they wage against each other every day!.

i was impressed by the balance you struck there, and how it showed the necessity of each!. i enjoyed that alot!.!.!.thank you :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know what she was so sad about, but this piece is very visual!.!.!.almost tragic!. It is a mystery, but sometimes poems are better left like this so we can figure it out!. I liked it, great work! Www@QuestionHome@Com

hope abounds in the light of a new day!.
beautify written!.
my neighbors sometimes awaken me!. this morning all is quit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know you have written a moving piece when this hard old man gets a tear in his eye from the picture you have painted so well with nothing more than your own heart and a few well chosen words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful inspiring story you have touched my soul,Thank you


JMMWww@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, poetic language!. This could well have been written in the 19th Century!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You continue to impress me Ma!. Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A great story told well, almost a parable!. Definitely a keeper! My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good Ma!.!.Nope i dont have neighbors that wake me!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!.!.!.very deep and kinda sad also
I wonder what she cries for
good one maWww@QuestionHome@Com