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Question: Tell what you think i can change or add to make it better!?
The Unfinished:


You left me all alone



all my feelings are shown



I trusted you, I loved you



You were the best thing around



Then you left without a whisper or a sound



You left me a note and thats all



how can I still miss you and bawl



we were best friends



I guess until the end



this should be over I've had enough



but its just to rough
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