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okay!.!. there's this guy i like, we are friends well he looks just like oliver sykes, where into the same music, like rock, punk, metal, screemo and all!. i have a crush on him ever since i met him which was for a long time, but he had a girlfriend!. cause i always think of him, i had the same dream for 3 nights that he gave me bunch of red roses to me at school, and when i woke up my sis said that he broke up with his gf!. a few weeks later he had a good friend and she is his gf!. they are really good and happy together!. so i dont want to interfeer with that cause he is my friend!. but i really like him!. i dont know how to stop it, i always think of him, whats he been upto and all!. i cant stop looking at his pics with him and his gf!. also when i look at him!. and i cant tell him how i feel !. !. well cause i dont know!. but we are friends!.
From the core of my heart
to the bottom of my brain
i will say this again and again
i love you
but i wonder
if you ever feel the same
but when i think of you
i feel my heart is going down the drain
(i dont know about this last line but please help me finish it)
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think you already did!.
"Help me finish this please!. Just tell me: You!. Love!. Me!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
How about:
From the core of my heart
to the bottom of my brain
i will say this again and again
i love you
but i wonder
if you ever feel the same
but when i think of you
i feel my heart is going down the drain
So please tell me your answer,
BEcause i cant stand this pain
:D
thats a really nice poem, and good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com
I just hope that one day, you can see my pain!.
OR
I just hope that one day, you can feel my pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
(you typed) i feel my heart going down the drain (i say) as if you were there to feel my pain
good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com
i feel my heart is going insane!.
or
i feel my heart cold as rain!.
or
i feel my heart fill with pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
just standing there,
with the fear
that you would never be here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
so take this gun and end my pain!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
look dear,i m also a girl and can understand ur problam!.
i believe one thing that if u feel true love 4 any 1,God also help u always,if it will beeter 4 u then he will give u and if not then he give u patience!.if ur love happy with anyone then feel happy 4 him!.try to control urself and pray to GOD!.but always take care him as a good friend!.ok!.just leave it on ALLAH!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Why take help, you have come along this long with the poem
Why not yourself come up with an end, trust me that will be the best possible end this poem can get!.
Mind spending some of your valuable time to answer my questions!?
You answers mean a lot to me!.
1> What would you think, if i commented on your picture with these words!?
For girls/ see from their point of view:
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/!?qid=2!.!.!.
2> What Do You Think About These Words!?:
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.
Thanks have a nice day
al yoz
~fiazio
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