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Question: I made another poem! opinion plz!?
I don’t have my homework
I don’t have my homework ‘cause I lost it in a bet
It’s now a paper airplane
flying in the shape of a jet!.
I don’t have my poetry, I don’t have the work
I left it on the school bus
the words are covered in dirt!.
My baby sister, while out of her crib, got drool on all the answers
I picked it up & threw it out
then rushed to the hand sanitizer!.
Wait, it’s are first day of school!?
What was I so worked up about!?
I must have drank to much water from the pool!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ok you're trying to sketch situations on why the person hasn't had his homework!.!.!. he lost in a bet, he left it in a vehicle, his sibling drooled over it!.!.!. Good! that's a technique!.
but the last part!.!.!. what's the connection of the pool!?
take note: it should be "our" not "are"
Add one or two sketches in the poem!. Then, show us, in further stanzas, what happened to person after not having done his homework!? Was he scolded by the teacher!? Or has he thought of a way of doing his homework, or escaping punishment, or other funny, or serious, alternatives!?
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i like it :)
it would be awesome as a song! Are you any good at singing!?Www@QuestionHome@Com