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Question: THOUGHTS ON MY POEM!.!.!.!?
cloaking; confined about the dismal clouds above
waiting, watching; plagued by love
occasionally revealing diminutive radiance
illuminating a great emanating brilliance
great distance from me
aura as imminent as can be
a schism forms upon the ice
sluggish; leisurly; oblivion of the shell does entice
perform to the public as true
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