Let us validate the word
allow us to plight your eyes
with wonder
grant us the chance to hum
in the darkness while you listen
with gutted ears
save us from brutal sentiment
and seduce our virility
with your needs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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allow us to plight your eyes with wonder grant us the chance to hum in the darkness while you listen with gutted ears save us from brutal sentiment and seduce our virility with your needs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Such reverie in your words as I - blessed with notion that nobody in their right mind, unless they are taking the pisss, must say, "I went on an agrestic retreat because the word, rural will do it for you"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If so, you should contest the will!.!.!. you certainly have the right, and no one could disagree with that; to say otherwise would be an abridgment of your constitutional rights!. But this poem says nothing to me other than your need to assert your rights!. I fail to see the artistry in your poem, the presence of any poetic device; your avatar tonight is imaginative, however, and for that I commend you!. Now I know you will construe this as "brutal sentiment," but it is honestly, not hurtfully, rendered!. Your virility, such as it is, interests me not, but sir, it pays to advertise and perhaps another ship will sail into port if you persist!.!.!. Ta ta!Www@QuestionHome@Com Dave, I read this as a poet's cry to his readers!.!.!. and the "seduce our virility with your needs" line really, really opened my eyes to something!.!.!.!.the reaction the writer longs for IS directly proportionate upon the needs of the reader, isn't it!? I hadn't thought of that correlation before!. You so smart!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com hmm!.!. after contemplation I find I agree with your question!. The 'right to write!.' How so very true!. One question for you!.!."plight" means a predicament, 'ply' means 'to keep offering!.' I must confess I stumbled over this as I read and am unsure if it is meant or accidental!?Www@QuestionHome@Com In anomalously we are given the right to write! Plus for You,it should be allowed by name! You write so well! We need the right to hum any-wear we please,in the darkness or be it daylight! If only to seduce our virility with our own needs! Very good read!!Www@QuestionHome@Com As others have already said!.!.!.the ability to write is a gift!. So as yours is one you don't seem to use to its full potential, why not give it to someone who might know what to do with it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com The ability to write is not a right, it is a gift!. Those who have received such a gift should use it wisely, as you do!. Www@QuestionHome@Com OK!.!.no brutal sentiment!.!.!.I'm all ears, Mr!. Boo!.!.!. Oh, OK!.!.!.Mr Spider Blood!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com But my ears like to get glutted, that's the plain and simple truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com bequeathed!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com We can write all we want!. The trick is getting people to read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com As EP says "it's a gift" Mr SB you give generously!. Many thanks for this present!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Its a good sentiment!. ;) Www@QuestionHome@Com Whoa, what a thought provoking statement!. I love it! What was that part in the middle again!?Www@QuestionHome@Com One of my favs so far!. Www@QuestionHome@Com For those that may be queathed, A granite gift!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |