It's probably not the greatest poem in the word but it's just an amateur one and it's just for a school project and I just wanted to know if it's good or no!. Any brutal comments about it I really seriously don't care about!. Thank you!
And be as honest as you have to to because it won't hurt my feelings or anything!.
Let's just get all this stupid stuff!.
It is just so tough or even rough I have had enough!
With all this stuff that has to be done!.
I have to finish it one by one!.
It is so confusing it is hard to explain!.
It is something I have to gain!.
This world will not slow down for me each and every day!.
It is like a fee that you have to pay!.
It is so annoying it gnaws at my brain!.
It is something to hard to explain!.
It is something not so easy to describe!.
I guess it is time to subscribe!.
It is just to hard to even say!.
Oh it is just hard to explain!.
Something nobody can come out alive of!.
Soon we will go to the beyond and above!.
It does not last forever!.
But you might as well have that forever fun fever!.
I guess somebody could say!.
It is life as I explain!.
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