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Question: Are you a 'just' person!? What is your opinion of this rhyme!?
Just One Minute Now!
by Elaine Polin

The judge's opinion has been just,
He's a person I can trust!.

We go to church, we're just on Sunday,
Does that make us righteous Monday!?

You have made a just reply,
Always proper, do or die!.

This property is a just claim
This is called 'eminent domain!.'

Luna just arose tonight,
A moment ago, she shed her light!.

Now, the weather is just great,
It's really sunny in my State!.

Your analysis is just, it's true,
That's why I believe in you!.

I'll try to escape just in time,
Before the bullet hits my rhyme!.

I am just trying to say,
Only, please avoid this word today!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Everyone will probably get mad at me for this, but I just don't think this poem is up to your standards!.
I like the message, that's not it!. What's the word I'm looking for!? Juvenille, maybe!?
*Just* my opinion!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Leave me alone!.!.!.!.you bully!.

I love the word 'just' it helps me with
the meter in impossible lines of rhyme!.
(Yes, I know fillers in poetry
are something on which folks frown)
But
I am JUST a Learner, so
I'm allowed a certain lee-way
In my scrabblings
And my scribblings
On poetry's grid-locked freeway!.

Fun write (you really hate the mis-use of that word, don't you)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is just so beautiful!~

And to the question in your poem, yes, if you are justified by faith, you are just every day, not just Sunday or attending a church!. That is the good news of grace of Christ!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Justly just, this poem does justify
all that is just, just in time just
just now I must adjust my just
and ban the word today called just!

Fun play on words!. I will avoid the word today, although I may have to 'adjust' my vocabulary! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Your precise and impartial take on the word, in my honest opinion, is very proper and is exactly what it deserves to hold the definition of it upright!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just Jellz!? Yeah I can dig that! Next time I have a name change I will use that thanks!

Oh yeah, the poem!.!.!.!.just as you say!.!.!.!.It actually took me longer than "one minute" to read and absorb it!.

My verdict - Just Right!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ok just a minute!. it seems like what your saying is just too true!. The use of "just" in a poem robs the poem of other descriptive content that would do the poem more justice!. I see your point!Www@QuestionHome@Com

If and when the just is only written, justly, and that only signifies a proper day in a court of just-ice!.!.!.!.
Would be nice!.!.!.ice is justly convenience!.!.!.!.
COFFEE!!!!1Www@QuestionHome@Com

My equitable, sound reply, thought up not long ago, arrives barely in time to justify your words!.

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Just Watch out for the scary one with all the different faces!. He will come back for candy 400 times!.
HAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAA
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, I'm just a person!. (and I thought I was the only one who filled lines with "just" just to fix the meter; "and" works well, too!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just one more time, please!. I use to over use the word "it" Bet you
could write one on "it!." your poem was just enjoyable!.
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Just you wait and see how many people will try and justify their use of the word "just"!.I am just one of them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very interesting!. I love the many ways you use just -- it shows the potential for overuse by a less skilled writer!.
t!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful, i like the way its well put together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just hush and kiss me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We use it incorrectly most of the time, don't we!?

You have justified our ignorance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll try, just this once! Great Poem!. Happy Halloween, E!.P!.!
hee!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

just is!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com