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Position:Home>Poetry> What hurts more than...what?Question: What hurts more than!.!.!.what!? You Called Me Come in my friend Let's begin To mend fences Broken when words spoken Left me hearing Silence of footsteps Doors, unhinged by hate In shallowed pools of contempt Poisoned airs bloated with over kill In murderous tones of reality Ignited over a single sound Not the "n" word or religious slants Nothing political or sexist All I had for you, lost now In the instant you called me A liar ?rad103008 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: are u a budding philosopher!? good keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com Fences cease to be mendable when ones reality is deluded by pernicious thoughts that become their reality, yet have never happened in reality!. When you become the "Liar"or "Whore", what ever they wish to term it and in the same breath or pen stroke profess undying love, one has to ponder on their sanity and what it will do to yours if you keep trying to mend a fence that quite obviously cannot be mended!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Your question, what hurts more, than being called a liar when you know you aren't!? Is that right!? (simplified, true) Well let me see!.!.!.!.!.What would hurt more is finding out they were right!. Which brings me too, Would a liar who said they weren't lying, know they were lying!? Once trust is broken, don't even think of trying to win it back!. Nature won't allow it, deep down that is, really far down in there where the dragon live!. Don't go down where the dragon lives cause the dragon knows when and where the truth lies!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, the "L" word is the worst to be called, I agree!. Mending fences is always good, good luck with yours!. A very deep and heartfelt write!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com The form of this piece is intriguing!. (cool) The lead calls the end calls the body calls the end!. Dealing with 'malafede' means no deal!. Gotta trust!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That's fightin' talk where I come from!. Mind you, I've moved since!. This caught me up short on the last line, well written, I like this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com fences are meant to be fixed!. there could be problems that need tending to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is easier to love then to trust!. one can be loved without being trusted!. Trust must be earned!. Www@QuestionHome@Com booooooooooo!Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked this poem!.Sometimes we lie rather than tell the truth!.Truth can sometimes hurt more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com niceWww@QuestionHome@Com |