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Position:Home>Poetry> WHO LIKES THIS POEM THEN?Question: WHO LIKES THIS POEM THEN!? i Wish
i wish for a falling star so everythink can be better again i sit alone in my bedroom hearing my mum and dad worry i cry every now and again wishing there would be a falling star i wonder what it be like for a better life loads of money talent but would i find love in my heart my nan and grandad are struggling My Aunty And Uncle Are Fighting Will They Disapear Will This Family Be a Disaster Only If There Was a Falling StarWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really like it!. It gives the idea of simplicity that all of life's strife can be wished away (like a child thinks) And, it shows intuition of a future and the writer's aspirations (like a teenager thinks) And closes with the observation of life's true struggles (that adults think of) And then closes full circle back to the youth!. I think one more line between the "family disaster" and Only if!.!.!. would make that transition a little smoother!. Maybe a gazing at the night sky or I look out my window or something like that to soften the ending of the quick change from dispair to a dream or wish!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it better than ur song!. ur funny!Www@QuestionHome@Com I found it hard to understand - are you wishing for things to get better or worse!. You seem to be wishing for both!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm thinking more time awake in English language class is what will help you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it a lot!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |