What do you think of my first stab at poetry?

Question: What do you think of my first stab at poetry!?

Roses are red
Violets are blue
err!.!.!.something something
something something something
something!.!.er!.!.something
Rubber and glue

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Well you just made me spew Dr Pepper out of my nose:) I wasn't prepared for such talent I guess!. Lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can be brutally honest but first, you got to be serious with your first stab at poetry!. Until then, no comment, except try harder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ur goofy :) in a good way ofcourse!.

roses are red violets are blue
err!.!.!.!.boing boing la di da
di da da da da da da da da da ada ada ada boing boingboING BOING BOING BOING BOOOOIIIINNNNNGGGG >>>> CRASHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!
Toyota and Subaru

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It's not bad as a first effort!.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue!.
But there are white roses,
And mauve violets too!.
Flowers are funny -
Like rubber and glueWww@QuestionHome@Com

absolute shear brilliance, not really liking the first two or the last line though if i am honest
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Stab it again!.!.!. it deserves to die; now! you must be humane!. It's suffering!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Roses are red Violets are blue your poetry does nothing for you-- lol

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Roses are red
Violets are blue
They got no brain
And neither have youWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.!.soothing, I think that the first two lines need touching up a bit though, the rest!? very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

come her boi!!
wheres your ball !?!!?!
wheres your ball !?!!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

that's pretty in depth there!

try being more Original!

i thot it was pretty good tho =]Www@QuestionHome@Com