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Question: POEM EXPERTS LETS HAVE A COMPETITION BRING OUT UR BEST !?
ok heres the question
can you make a poem that's about a friend who stopped being the other persons friend
IN THIS CASE YOUR THE FRIEND WHOSE BEING HURT
FRIEND NOTHING ABOUT LOVE
no this isnt a assignment promise im just doing this for fun
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brown and ruffled scruffy hair,
Big blue eyes that shine and glare!.
He stares at me,
I turn the other way!.
Why would i talk to someone whom i have just been betrayed!?
He gives me a pleading look with eyes that seem wise
But i know the truth behind them,
Just a bunch of made-up lies!.
He hooks you on him,
Like a fish!.
He was the one with which you had your very first kiss!.
I liked him at first,
Maybe even thought i might burst,
With happiness of course!.
But in due time,
He loses his mind,
And begins to swerve off-course!.
He decides he just wants to be friends,
I look into his eyes!.
How could i have beleived in him and his silly made up lies!?
All the nights of "I love you"
Gone with the wind!.
But maybe i can recover!.
The past is the past, after all!.
But to some like me,
The past is the present!.
Sorry, i know u asked for a friend thing, but i meant for it to seem like they were friends, they grew to like each other, then fell apart again!.
I also made it up on the spot sooo!.!.!.yeh
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I lost a Friend Today
I lost a friend today, I didn't see her pain
I was too busy with my own life to notice the sadness in her eyes, the emptiness in her voice
I never realized that just a kind word or a hug from me would let her know she was not alone in the world
I took for granted her friendship not knowing she was crying out for mine
I assumed she knew we were friends even though I never told her so
I lost a friend today
She looked ok the last time I saw her--or did she!?
She tried to talk to me but I was tired so I just made polite conversation
She knows she can talk to me anytime about anything, doesn't she!?
I feel so alone now, is this how she felt!?
She always seemed to be just fine, didn't she!?
I was here for her, wasn't I!?
I lost a friend today
Things will never be the same
She came into my life at a time when I needed a friend
Her friendship was unconditional
I never once thought this would happen so soon
Now she will never know what her friendship meant to me
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idk um:
My Feelings of Betrayal
As my body breaks apart!.
As I stand there thinking,
My heart feels like its sinking!.
I feel betrayal
I feel emptiness
I feel lossed
I feel like I just got tossed
As I remember our memories
As I remember our friendship
I feel like I just got ripped
I feel so cold
I feel so sad
As I turn away,
A flood of tears start streaming down
I feel lonely and disconbobulated
I knew I just should have waited
It was a ridiculous fight
I got her infuriated
Now I knew she for sure hated me
There was no reason denying it
She got in a stupid fit
But I know!.!.
Its over
For good
As I pull up my hood,
My legs cant move
I can not force my legs too much
I can not bring on a form of such
As I start to think,
Her words come back to me:
"I dont care, you were never a good friend,"
"You and I both know were done,goodbye go have fun!."
The End
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"I tell you the truth
There is no greater love than this
That a man lay down his life
For a friend!."
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