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Question: Care for a glimpse down the alley!?

Self Served

cheese fries stuck to the table
as old hamburger grease runs down my chin
I need not get clean for you
dining here is fine dining to me

paperware on brick linens
hot and cold running world
table for two no waiting
dinner by kerosene light

reflecting on the look in your eyes
you had me at,"Don't touch me!"

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Reality is!.
Now where were we!?
Oh yes, having dinner out side in the alley!.
If I were hungry you bet I'd join you!.
The touching thing!? Has nothing to do with being filthy and germy!.
It has to do with the though of what could happen after dinner!.
Well you didn't pay for it so she doesn't have to feel abliged!.
Maybe worried but they know they are equals here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know what let me keep it true
its not the best poem, but
i think its better than most of the poems on YA
because its not made up

I bet half of the poems on YA are identical to the other half
"im sad love broken in !.,, half!.!.!.in thirds!.!.!.!. dararara!.!.!."
if you know what i mean!. Good workWww@QuestionHome@Com

Definitely dark here!. More like a tunnel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh, how many times have those words left my mouth!.!. ! the emphasis being on "don't"

cheers,

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