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Position:Home>Poetry> Easy 10 pt! do u like my poem, what's your fav line?Question: Easy 10 pt! do u like my poem, what's your fav line!? Paper Doll Onion peel rice paper Gold leaf foil dragonfly wing Soap bubble mirror silver White skin bible page parchment like razor blade Water molecules Residual film Lip paper Fish scale On a weight scale Thin girl Super model Saltines starving smiles Cover page Paper doll vapor trail ashes now dust to wind particles well known, unseen all that's left poor movie queen!. copywrited, Saline Smiles by Michelle Boleyn!. soon to be on shelves next spring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really like it! And, it does make sense!. Honestly, it's hard to pick a favourite line, because they sort of function as a unity, don't they!? The nicest rhythm is "parchment like/razor blade", even if the words aren't as nice as some of the others!. I don't like "Lip paper/fish scale", because when I read it the first time, I saw "Lip scale/Fish paper" and it grossed me out ;) I like the last line the best, too, but not because it's the end of the poem (how rude!)!. I like it because the word choice is solid, smooth, and unpretentious!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh cool I must get out my dictionary and pick out random words and I will get published too!. Well done!.And there I was thinking that putting sentences together and using deep metaphors and imagery was the way to success!. Cheers, you have given me hope!. My favorite line is 'poor movie queen' because its the end of it!. :) :) :) :) :)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com not a fan of this type of poetry, but i did like : "starving smiles Cover page" To me i feel it means the smiles are a facade, a sort of "cover page" for the truth and what someone is hiding!.Www@QuestionHome@Com this is a great poem, but I hope you feel ok!. Try not to stress over life so much, its not worth it, trust me, think about the important things in life, like how its a gift from god to live through each day!. hope u doin ok, take care Www@QuestionHome@Com I like the first 10 to be honest, you have to search really deep to understand the connections!.Www@QuestionHome@Com it started to make sense to me twoards the end seemed like the begginning was all over the placeWww@QuestionHome@Com What kind of poem is this!? Ive never read a poem like this!. I guess i like the last two lines bestWww@QuestionHome@Com I don't understand it!. Favorite Line: White Skin Bible Page!.Www@QuestionHome@Com wtf is this poem!. its mad retarded i dont like any of itWww@QuestionHome@Com i like all of it but i would chose Gold leaf foil u are a great poet dragonfly wingWww@QuestionHome@Com just doesn't make sense Www@QuestionHome@Com i dont like itWww@QuestionHome@Com I like it My favorite line is "dust to wind"Www@QuestionHome@Com its awesome!. firts line!. now just give me my 10 points!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |