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Question: Do you like my poem that I made in 5 minutes!?
As I looked into the morning dawn,
I stood up and did a big yawn!.
My eyes spotted the window as I opened the shades!.
I danced around as I undid my braids!.
The morning was calling me deeply!.
My mind was racing steeply!.
As the day grew on,
The morning was utterly gone!.
My mind flew away,
And that was how I spent today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it's lovely, i love the idea of it all!. it's almost like an introduction to the day of someone, and they tell the rest of that persons lifew with the last two lines!. very good for 5 minutesWww@QuestionHome@Com

its cute, but not deep, not penetrating
like a nursery rhymeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Next time spend a bit longer on it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was a super fast day!.!.!. lol
but i like it good job =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice and simple
i like it yarWww@QuestionHome@Com