Please give me feed back or Opinion on my poem I wrote?

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hi i just wanted people info on my poem nothing too big just want feed back if its a lovely poem then its just me giving back and sharing!. here it is please rate it from 1-10 and tell me how it makes ya feel!. thanks
here it is
we can be friends
we can't be lovers
nstead we are just special to one another
we can't be friends
we can be lovers
we are just special to one another
You want to be friends
I want to be lovers
Yet we will just stay special to one another
we'll bump heads
we'll have our fights
The conflict of this love
How will this end each night
A beautiful thing almost set out to be a tregedy
Harsh endeavour of this fidelity
War of two hearts special to one another
Hard to speak from the heart
Since The heart Can't speak how the heart feels
No word can describe how intimate my love is
Love will solve everything
Your all I see !.!.!.All I need
Your just special to me Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It' s meanfully and beautiful a poem!.I think you can send this poem!.
My opinion , your this love very strong and deeply!. I think it will be happy days for yous!.

Really , she have to be special for you!.

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Well, you rhyme in places and don't in others, you need to watch that!. Are you writing for pleasure or do you want to get published!? For pleasure it's fine but if you want to get published it needs some work!. It needs punctuation mainly, some spelling corrections, and the flow needs to be adjusted!. It's really a good poem in the making!. Keep it and work with it!. I'm sure that you can fix it and make it become a wonderful love poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com