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Question: How about some friendly advice!?

Instant insanity!.
The rush of clear hell through my mind,
set all else aside!.
Spinning wildly,
thoughts collided at the speed of speed!.
Reaching to the jugular to check my station,
I knew!.
This was close!.!.!.!.
really close!.!.!.!.
too close!.!.!.!.

My last words!.!.!." I think that was too much"

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My breath just got caught in my throat, I couldn't breathe, I started to cry!.

I wonder if the's what John Belushi said, or the others!? My friend Janis and Dave!. Od od od DOA!
You caught me off guard!. Whew!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

We all have feelings of anxiety on certain days, or if you're like me you feel nervous and anxious all the time!. Sometimes you just feel like a bombs ticking inside your mind and threatening to blow up, spilling out millions and millions of worries, thoughts, ideas, memories, and observations!. You want to let out the stress and calm down, but you also don't want to drown in the resulting tidal wave of emotion!. Great poem, realistic and very unique!. Beautifully described with great purpose and determination!. May your words carry you from all your moments of stress!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hell and clarity don't often collide together!. Hell is a cloud that snuffs out light!. The only part of hell that is real is the exterior, the part we see from the ground below of from the sky above!. The rest of hell is completely imagined!. God lives inside our minds!. We don't create him, he molds us!. Find your God inside and you will find poetry!. Until then, your butterflies will always flutter away!.

I can't be friendlier than that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thoughts collided at the speed of speed!. One would have had to be there to be here now!. I was!. You were!. Advice heard and tucked away into the proper folder!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Having a ticker that often explodes, I know this feeling well!.
Yet, I missed the friendly advice in this!.!.!.unless it was given in your last words!.

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take time to be!.
think of the free!.
you will see
me!.

blood rushing!.
tears falling!.
heart pounding!.
bunny hopping!.


stress
is
killing
me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's only anxiety!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com



with one wrist in heaven, one ankle in hell
somebody pushed or he just fell

-Jim CarrollWww@QuestionHome@Com

At "rush of clear" I though of wet dream!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Carry a brown paper bag and read TD or NTWww@QuestionHome@Com

Don't jump!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Will we see it on YouTube!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i suck at making poems, so i pretty much like any poem:]Www@QuestionHome@Com