this is what i have so far!.!.!.!.
I crossed a bridge of marble stone,
Clutching the rails with hands of bone!.
Below flowed a river of flawless glass,
Into the life from which I'd passed!.
I gazed within and my heart felt tight,
As the world I saw simply was not right!.
Time was still and gaunt as death,
As if every soul had held their breath!.
I searched each face for smile or laugh,
But there was not a one unto the last!.!.!.!.!.!.
5 stanzas!.!.!. i had eight at one point!. but i didn't like it!.!.!.
anyways, my question is, is this even worth finishing!? it's gonna be long if i do, and it's taking me forever to write it!.!.!.!. and if i do finish, based on what you've read, do you think that it might be good enough to publish!?
and also someone told me i need to count the syllables in every line to make them match up, otherwise it doesn't sound like it flows!.!.!.
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can it sound ok if i don't do that, because trying to is only making this harder to write!.!.!.!.
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