What do you think of my poem i made up :)?

Question: What do you think of my poem i made up :)!?

MY FIRST, LAST AND ONLY LOVE!.

I need time to go with only you
‘Special’ time – just us two
When the sun is down and skies are grey
Your magic words lighten my day
I want to be with you for all my years
You hold me close and dry my tears
I love the time we spend together
I hope it lasts forever and ever
Everyday you make me smile
A sign of happiness that stays a while
Happiness comes and happiness goes
My love for you just grows and grows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

hey!. this is sweeet :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i'd love to be the person you wrote it for but i'm not sure about the 'special time' bit!.!.!.unless that is something between you and the one its about! but its such a sweet, cute poem and i think you should get it published or you can enter it online at www!.poetry!.com
goood luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

1000000000/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats so romantic i love it, why not try to get it published well done!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awww!.!.!. it's so cute! i'd try and seperate it though!.!.!.!. more punctuation!. but it's goodWww@QuestionHome@Com