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Question: A haiku presentation!.!.!.What greets you in the morning!?
Stretches tip to toe
Gaping mouth jaw expanding
Opens sleepless eyes
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Daylight through curtain
Sol’s Brilliant stunning assault
Chases dreams distant
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Obscure memories
Haunt imaginations depths
Half baked dreams at best
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Morning smells swirl
Coffee, bacon, grits and gravy
Greet early riser
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I have the same greetings, except for the food!. My half-baked dreams discourage me from having any thing but coffee and, of course, the bloody cigarette!.
Nicely expressed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful way to wake up!. But nobody here to make coffee, bacon, grits and gravy for me!. Good US southern breakfast!. I know you got all your vowels correct but couldn't ruin the beautiful poem to count each line!. Beautiful Sol!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it! Especially the personification of Sol!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nothing like what greets you I fear!. But then, I wake up with indifference!.Www@QuestionHome@Com