Salt and pepper are used to bake
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pick them up and shake shake shake when your meal is all done you'll have food for everyone!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: OMG yer so good!. Makes me wanna dance and shake shake shake shake shake shake shake my booty Oh Yeah ! Edit: Gosh forgot to rate!.!. TEN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep Writing Hope That HelpedWww@QuestionHome@Com For each eigenvector of a linear transformation, there is a corresponding scalar value called an eigenvalue for that vector, which determines the amount the eigenvector is scaled under the linear transformation!. For example, an eigenvalue of +2 means that the eigenvector is doubled in length and points in the same direction!. An eigenvalue of +1 means that the eigenvector is unchanged, while an eigenvalue of ?1 means that the eigenvector is reversed in direction!. An eigenspace of a given transformation for a particular eigenvalue is the set (linear span) of the eigenvectors associated to this eigenvalue, together with the zero vector (which has no direction)!. Using this ratio, your poem scores -1!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A sign of mutual understanding, living, and communication on the basis of purity (meal) and satisfaction ( food for every one)!. However, there is always an exception for those who are allergic to the (two) main ingredients of a good meal, salt and pepper!.!. Well put!10/10!Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a work my dear old friend Of the most towering thought; How many seconds did you spend Before applause you sought!? You seem to be on quite a roll You've penned while penning here I'm sure you think that I'm a troll But you're no poet dear!. Instead you have a group of dolts Who follow you around And claim that they'll brook no revolts And yet it does astound Me how you serve a foodless meal To every passerby Yet if they choke, you seem to feel They should lay down and die!. Well if they do, just rest your mind It's really not your fault!. The problem I'm sure you will find Is food is more than salt!. But keep your pen in motion son You'll one day better be; But this in truth is not the one To help us better see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't want the points!. Out of!.!.oh, say ten!.!. 7 for originality (who uses PEPPER to BAKE!?!?!? remind me never to eat your cookies!.!.!.sheesh) 8 for 'flow' 1 overall for claiming it's your best!. And the one is only cause I grudgingly respect you for staying faithful to the Vikings!. It's a sympathy vote doncha know!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Who cares what your making!? Other than baking You can really shake it up With salt and pepper and we'll sup The meal's the real deal In Black and White When we're done Whatever we feel There's no fight We've had our fun!. Eleventy-nine for the effort!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You need to add a little more detail in the beginning that gives the reader a reference of how much food you are preparing, before simply introducing everyone!. I'll give it a 6 because I like pepper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Is this a poem, dear ol' Buk!? It really is your best one yet!. Or don't you give a flyin' f***!? I'd be prepared to take that bet!. EvlywhereareyouIloveyou!?! Www@QuestionHome@Com As Neonman might not say - "My condiments" I wanna speak to the Chef! Going bake to basics Mag!? "In the beginning there was the Word!.!.!." Good write, yeah right!Www@QuestionHome@Com Are you talking about sausages again!? I rate it at an 9 out of a possible ten only because I do not want to see your ego get any largerWww@QuestionHome@Com 10 Another great metaphor!.!.!. Salt and pepper, black and white, our words upon the page!. Heavy! ma Www@QuestionHome@Com The rhyme is there, but your meter is a bit lacking!. Don't be discouraged, with a bit of work, you could be ok!. Www@QuestionHome@Com You should be published!.!.!.!.in der weiner schnitzelgrubinheimermagWww@QuestionHome@Com not your best work!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.i fell asleep halfway through!.!.!.!.maybe if you shortened it!.!.a little more!.!.that might work !?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.seamanabWww@QuestionHome@Com A little heavy on the pepper there! I can't stop sneezing long enough to rate it!Www@QuestionHome@Com The food of the Gods, surely a 10!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem is giving me hypertension! I'm suing yahoo!Www@QuestionHome@Com food yea!. i am hungry!. i rate it as a 100!. that being good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com The most beautiful poem I have ever read!. I'll give you another 10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yeah, but who's gonna wash the dishes!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!.!.!.*applauds*Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh my! You oughta be published!. Www@QuestionHome@Com THAT SUK'DWww@QuestionHome@Com ROFL, can I throw up now or do I have to wait in line!?Www@QuestionHome@Com !.!.!.now that's tasty!Www@QuestionHome@Com Awesome !!! now I need some pork chops Www@QuestionHome@Com uhhhh!.!.!.!.whats this poem for!? i give it a three or a two!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Rating ----- 3!.1415 etc!. Now bake us all a giant Pie !!.Www@QuestionHome@Com this poem makes me wanna eat lol!.!.!.!. mmmmmm rating! lol how bout a million ur awesome! LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com |