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Position:Home>Poetry> Will you read and comment on "Where the Ice Grows Thin?"?Question: Will you read and comment on "Where the Ice Grows Thin!?"!? "Where the Ice Grows Thin" by Peter Benoit He must have heard the muffled crack That echoed just beneath his feet And known the cold abyss and hack Of icy knives on grizzled meat!. He must have sensed the hour had come To cross the waters in the West; He must have known it's borne by some To understand before the rest!. He must have let his fire die out, His chimney stood so cold and gray With embers tiered as though a doubt Arranged them when it came to stay!. He must have known how thin the ice Would grow there at the hint of Spring, Poised like a slowly opening vise To press a silver-tangled wing!. He must have thought of all he'd lost, How those few fated to remain Upon an island tempest-tossed Might wonder there what earthly stain Compelled a soul to pass this way -- 'Tis but a bitter triumph won By dust and ashes swept away In shadow, 'neath a dying sun!. And so he turned for shore, to live -- To squander precious gold is sin; But then the world would crack and give No quarter, where the ice grows thin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Well, we're being spoiled by some good poetry tonight!. One wonders how one person can write so consistently well!. Some poets would consider themselves fortunate to write a handful of high-quality verse in their lifetimes, but one or two poets on this site seem to be able to do time after time!.!.!.and with apparent ease as well!. It's just a shame that these individuals do not receive the recognition that they so richly deserve!. The (non) readers' loss, alas!Www@QuestionHome@Com This is one of my favorite poems I've read over the past several months!. Not just for its content--that feels as if I was the old man on the ice--but for its sound!. When reading it out loud I can't help but acting like I'm an old man telling a story by a campfire in a low, booming voice with heavy stresses!. It's just fun to read--feels good on the lungs!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, I've waited long enough!. This stuff bores me to tears!. Well constructed with nice flow and then nothing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |