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Question: Have you ever tried to think of your first memory and only see fragments of it!?
Tired and slow!.
Dog, barking!.
I run!.
Mother and neighbor!.
Fat old lady!.
Thin green dress!.
I’m hot!.
I sit, kitchen floor!.
She stands near!.
I look up!.
Flesh everywhere!.
Hair!.
Blue veins!.
I’m up on my knees!.
Inches away now!.
It stinks, she screams!.
Her leg, my face!.
Sweat, more stink!.
Mom, laughing!.
Home again!.
Dog, barking!.
Tired and slow!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
silent and tense
plastic soldiers lined for battle
on faded brown linoleum

germans in sloped helmets
hold the high ground
of the bottom stair

Americans stand ready
with tanks and bazookas
waiting to fire

the front door swings wide
and my father ends the war
without firing a single shot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My earliest memory is running through and attic with my brother!. There is a section with a ladder on it and clothes on hangers are hanging from this ladder's rungs!. They appear to be winter clothes!. Coats, heavy sweaters and such!. I was grown before I ever mentioned this memory to my Mama and she told me it was impossible for me to remember it because the only place it could have been was a house we lived in when I was 18 months old!. But there you go! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, I can only see fragments, may be because vision works in a selective mode, to furnish a skeleton for the memory theme, the rest is left to to be filled by ones imagery( among other factors)!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a high wall on a curved street in England!. We're walking on the sidewalk, the wall to our right!. There are green vines crawling over the top of the wall!.

Mom says I can't possibly remember that because I was two and a half!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. That ridiculously short plaid dress with the big lace collar and those tights with ruffles on the butt!. (Kidnergarten)

* I accidentally ruined those tights the first day I wore them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

my first real memory is of my brother having a seizure in his crib at 2 months old!. I had just turned 4!. I asked mom what was wrong!.!.!.she said "nothing, go to bed"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Geez, that's really your first memory!?!?!?

That explains a lot!

And heck, you wrote it so well, I smelled the stink!.

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I remember living in the country running through plowed fields, climbing trees, making mud pies, and Mom's homemade biscuits!. Gosh, I wish I could re-live those days!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am seven years old
My mother's voice comes tired
over the telephone wire:
'I'm sorry, sweetheart
it was a boy,
You will have your own
little girl when
you grow up!.'
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Oh crap!.!.did you see her huge underwear too!?

I remember a strange, orange "aspergum"!.!.!.

(they chopped my tonsils when I was 3) Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes and I see more that fragments!. I see the whole thing guess that's why its so scary to think back when!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this reminds me of an old woman mom called a friend!. she constantly kept talking that mom couldn't get in a word!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

good ole mrs!. basleyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah Kind of like the way we get our news today!. Fragmented and distorted!. Www@QuestionHome@Com