The last poem for a stranger ...... ?

Question: The last poem for a stranger !.!.!.!.!.!. !?

She was the only one
that I could have met
so far away
but she felt my soul

funny I regret
the course of my life
over this,
so ridiculous

I wish to want you so bad
it hurts me so much

Because of me
that you seen me
but because of me
that you went away
because of me that i feel
this way
it seems like its all
because of me Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A couple changes would improve it!.!.!.
"so far away, but she "touched" my soul

"Because of me, "what you've seen in me"
"And all for that!.!. you went away"

"it is because of me, that I feel
this way"
You have to be careful to reread and check the flow and the position of the words, so as not to confuse the reader!.
This is a distraction!.!.!.
you can write simply with few words, but they must say the message clearly!.!.!.!.
keep trying, you will improve with practice!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com