Honest poem honest poem honest poem honest poem ?

Question: Honest poem honest poem honest poem honest poem !?

I talk good words
to get by
but evil thoughts rule
underneath those words
its like the mirror
of my thoughts are now broken
in pieces
it just doesnt
reflect what i say Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

PUNCTUATION!. i agree with the dude above me, taking out "are"
and also, you need some commas and periods!.

"I talk good words
to get by,
but evil thoughts rule
underneath those words!.
It's like the mirror
of my thoughts, now broken
in pieces,
just doesn't
reflect what I say!."

great job, though, i really like the idea expressed in it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

One small change
remove the word "are" in of
"my thoughts , now broken!.!.!.!.!."
It is hard to face the truth of man and how easily he says one thing and feels totally opposite!.
well done, simple and to the pointWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's good, I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I Likee It

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Very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com