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Question: Can I have some honest opinions on my poem that I wrote!?
Ok, here it is!.!.!.

I just don't know what happened,
I thought you were the one!.
You were everything that I wanted,
And everything that I thought we could be!.
But I guess we lost it!.
I' done with denying that I miss you,
Because it's true that I do,
But I know it can never work out between us,
And that I can't be with you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
HONEST:

It's really bad, childs play, 12-year-old junk!. But just keep trying your hardest, and read some really good poetry, and you could get better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com