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" FROM HOME TO HEAVEN"
I won’t let you leave
Why should you die!?
Staying by your side
Can go in blink of an eye
Morning arose
Peering at the bed
I had fallen asleep
And now he‘s dead
I can’t believe it
I never had the chance
Didn’t say goodbye
After my last glance
What can I do!?
There’s no where to go
Life without you
I don’t want to know
He had been taken
God had been true
A little darkness lifted
But I’m still without you
I will never forget
The days together
Every memory
You’re my love forever!.
Hey everyone, i'm 15 and i wrote this for no apparent reason!. yes it's made up and i hope you like it!.!.!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Now this is a better poem!. I like this one, it has meat on it's bones!. Keep writing like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Reminds me of when my Grandpa was dying, and my family went to visit him!. We knew he was going to pass, but I didn't think he would go so soon!.!.!.!.!.I remember falling asleep next to him (I was 10 at the time), and when I woke up, he had already passed on!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A father of boyfriend dieing and a person mourning their death!.
BTW that is an AWESOME poem i really liked it had great imaery i could see a person crying next to a hospital bed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I loved it!. Sad and happy at the same time is how I felt when I read your poem!. Sad for the one who lost the person that they care about and happy at the same time for the one in bed will no longer feel pain!.
Keep up the good write!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well, I like it! It reminds me of when someone I loved died and his funeral!. Great job read and rate my poem at!.!.!.
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Hi WOW that was my step daughter life!.
On 12/7 07 she woke up next to her 30 year old dead fiance!. Being a citified nurses aide, she did cpr to no avail!.!.!. wow Www@QuestionHome@Com
Forced in places!. Needs major revision!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It makes me think of having lost a loved one, person or pet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't quit your day job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it's really sad, you should wright more poetry this is really good Www@QuestionHome@Com
I dunno, to me it sounded like the loss of a loved petWww@QuestionHome@Com
made me feel!.!.!.sad,as it shud!.!.so its pretty good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow! I'm 16, and my BFF (I'd known her since my diaper days) died this summer!.!.!. instantly thought of her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Jesus Christ!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com