What you think of my poem? =]?

Question: What you think of my poem!? =]!?

now i know starting with 'E is for!.!.'
isnt the best way to start
but keep in mind
im only 14
and my teacher is requiring us to start out poems that way!.!.

so what do you think of it!?

E is for emotion
mine are extremely true
with the strongest devotion
my heart belongs to you

with the fear to love
and the love to fear
even if push comes to shove
ill always love you, my dear

Comments/ Revision!.!.anything is welcome!

please and thanks!.
?dejamariee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

EDIT!!!!!!!!

i think this is absolutely great!

i love it, seriously!.

can i have permission to post this on my myspace!? =]

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P!.S!. I can't have him back, he told me that he's gone for good!.!. but thanks for the encouragement!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

after devotion you should have a comma
but besides that the poem is awesome, great job!. im 14 but i can't write poems at all :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was very good and well wrote with hart!. I write poems too and it is good to see others sharing pomes and expressing them selves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

your poem was great, you are very talented!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very sweet!. Just add an 's' to emotion in the first line! Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, that's really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com