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Question: Is this a "Good Fit"!?
Good Fit
Like the sea
fills the ocean floor
your love fits me so well
Like the heat
fills a hot air balloon
your love fits me so well
Like the lyrics
carry a sweet melody
your love fits me so well
Like a down coat
in the mountain cold
your love fits me so well
Like laughter echoes
through a canyon pass
your love fits me so well
Like the stars
fill heaven above
your love fits me so well
Like these words
fill an empty page
your love fits me so well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If they don't know it fits, they won't wear it!.
"You can lead a horse to water
but faith is another matter"
The Black Crowes!.
http://au!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=lvqFkVNlWs!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice!. I'm not sure if I like how "your love fits me so well" is at the end of every stanza!. I think that its a smoother read if you just use that line in the 1st stanza and the last and leave it out in all the other ones!.
Beautiful!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Comfort fit is so much better!. I think it's just fine with the repetition of the last line!. But it flowed better for me when i omitted,"your love fits me so well" from all but the first and last lines only!.
Lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
To be worn proudly every day, won't want to be taking off something that fits so well!. Leaves me with a pleasant smile!. Thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's a perfect fit! I love it! Just the right size! Thanks, ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com
love is a glove that covers your hand with warmth!. good words on a sunday morn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm like "like these words"!. They fit so well!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Perhaps, like four lips,
Like stairway steps,
Your words fit me
So well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this poem is a perfect fit ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com
nice sentiments! use of Like gets redundant though!. But I think its part of your overall "look" to the poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
A very fitting poem of one who loves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I loved reading this!.!.!.!.it certainly looks like a "good fit" to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com