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I call it :

Perseverance

My Hope was lost!.
My SPIRIT shed its final tear!.
My HEART refused to care!.
Every time I needed someone,
they were never there!.
Alone I cried!.
Alone I felt!.
Abandoned by those who,
I thought were supposed to love me!.
Why does it feel like I am inferior,
and everybody is above me!?
Scared and alone I live my life!.
Not afraid of pain's harmful knife!.
People say we are not free!.
I say I am going to make my destiny!.
Regardless of what I must endure!.
I know in my heart I will persevere!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very good! Favorite line: "Regardless of what I must endure"Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Wow i think its really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com