Please rate my poem from 1-19?

Question: Please rate my poem from 1-19!?

Dog bored
so is she

the night comes
swift as she may

lessons learned
harder the stay

what to do!?
what to say!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

20, it is the bestestWww@QuestionHome@Com

I personally prefer poetry with much more imagery, it fills things out!.
Read some Cohen, cummings or Bukowski!. Maybe some Plath!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dont get it!.

answer mine

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fantastic!. 19 is a good number!. i love the part where the dog is bored and so is she!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

1, kind of short and uninteresting!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

11!. With more in the poem, it could easily have scored a 15 or 16 possibly!Www@QuestionHome@Com

2- your poem is missing rhythm!. It does not rhyme well and flow is broken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To be honest low , I do not want use number !. Try harder you have potential !.Good Luck Www@QuestionHome@Com

I say amen & horray, Your poem made my day, That's all I have to say!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

1Www@QuestionHome@Com

interseting
but needed more definitely!.
flows rather well
i'd give it a 11
fairly high mark from meWww@QuestionHome@Com

10-Nice

(are you O K)Www@QuestionHome@Com

7, I don't like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll give it a 17!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

14!. kinda chicken soup for the soulWww@QuestionHome@Com

For courage to put it up!.!.!.!.19

Sister, you have other talents!!!!
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