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Question: How about a 'fourteener'!?
When the silent stretch of morning wakes us with blazing sun
we crease our eyes and gaze the weary, awakening dawn!.
Our reason to rise greets us at the crux of daybreak's past!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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This is a serenade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the morning sunlight warms this vast land of my wasted thoughts
drawing her near rousing my senses!.!.!. keep walking she says
nightmares by a sleep of cold nights once thought of hopeless breath
glimmering at the edge of a silent glow!.!.!. a void lit
fading echoes of once nostalgic teardrops washed away!.!.!.
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the sun greats me with a new day!.
i stretch my arms out to grab a cig
the throne of life tells me to sit
coffee in hand i walk to the fridge
dang i learned something new today!.
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Its nearly 8 am , having a cup of coffee reading this!. But you know as half awake as i am i read form as the word from!. So you are still ok!.I didnt pay any attention to that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love this!. The complex and beautiful sentences paradoxically convey a simple concept!. The language and meaning are both lovely!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I haven't a clue what a fourteener is!.!.!.!.
but this is a beautiful ode to morning!.

Have more coffee, your typing may improve
but the writing needs no improvement!

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Makes me think how many beers did I have left out of that case I bought yesterday and where did I put them! Ha, you know i am kidding!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And a good morning to you too!. Hope your day is a good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Won't enjoy the dawn for a couple more hours!. A little further north than you!. Good morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

'fourteener' is that like a nooner, but at two!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, it's interesting!. I would prefer six sevens!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this!. Ha, I do it every day!. Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

can i get coffee with thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

My crux doesn't wait until daybreak to wake me!. You're lucky!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cool dude!.!.!.

I'll wait the beat debate :) a -wake-ning or a - wake - n - ing

My 'spresso is brewin' !.Www@QuestionHome@Com