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Question: Is my love poem good!?
ok so i recently just made a poem because i love this girl and shes practically driving me crazy now i made this on my own and i want to know if there's like another poem just like this anyways here's how it goes:


I can't express the way i feel
I can't describe them when your here
i can't stop thinking about you
and i always wanted to say I LOVE YOU

three little words so easy to say
three little words so easy to pronounce
yet when you're here all i can say is
hey how are you!.!.!.

each day i see you ,i want to
hug you,kiss your forehead and say i love you
you light up my day when i'm down
and you make me smile when i frown

the sad part about this is
i don't have the courage to tell you how i feel
each time i try to tell you how i feel
i fail and i miss my chance to heal

and with this burdened void in my heart
getting larger and larger since the start
i can only wish one day i get the courage
to tell you how i feel and just say!.!.!.!.
I LOVE YOU





again i would like to point
out i'm new to this poetry stuff
and i'm only a freshman in high school
if you guys can help make the poem a little better
i still don't know what kinda format this is suppose
to be so if you can help figure that out as well i would appreciate it
oh and the thing about the part wer it says "i miss my chance to heal" it means like heal myself from this burden i carry to tell you how i feelWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Keep writing poems!. It will help you understand your own feelings and rehearsing word in your mind will make you ready for the day when you can say those words I LOVE YOU and really mean them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Welcome to poetry!. You're not to bad!. Girls like guys who write poetry!. I do and I'm a woman!. I would like this poem!. I think it's very sweet!. Why don't you read some published poetry to get the feel of how poetry is supposed to be written!. I would say go for it!. You do have talent now hone it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You think you're good,
But that's not true,
You try to hide the freakin truth,
You're just pathetic,
You're not so good,
But still you're decent,
Cheers mate, cool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the poem is really good, especially when your new to writing some!.!.!.
you should really continue writing poems!.!.
your really good at doing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOOOOWITS REALLY GOOD
I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT
UR TALENTED BOI
NO SERIOUSLY!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
ITS GREAT AND VERY KEWT AND
I CANT XPLAIN BUT WELL DONEWww@QuestionHome@Com

its kinda original but its cute :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

u don't need to edit one bit!. u got everything in rite area!. it all great and cute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It makes sense and I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com