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I decided to give myself a challenge!. I am to write a poem about a quality that i posses but to write it in a way that my poem complements me!. Some of you who are reading this may not find this as a challenge, but for me it is!. If you have any advice on how I can make it easier for, that would help!. Please don't be too harsh on me, I am only twelve!.

Shy but Fair
A rose by a mossy stone,
Half hidden from the eye;
As sweet as raw honey,
A budding miss who's so promisin'
With beauty like a tightened bow!.

Fair as a star, twinkling bright,
When only alone shining in the sky!.
With nobleness made simple as a fire:
And a heart whose love is innocent,
But tell of days in goodness spent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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