Critique My New Poem: Dreams Come and Go?

Question: Critique My New Poem: Dreams Come and Go!?

Dreams flirting my heart
Dreams flirting my soul
They hold me
When I see the garden of roses
They tease me
When I see mountain highs
touching the clouds
They visit me
When I see the oceans
and waves rushing to the shores
Dreams sound in my ears
When I see the birds singing on trees
I feel it
When joy of life
Captures my being
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i like your poem its so awsome personally cuz i always like to go to the ocean or some other place were it quite and just start to dream
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Very nice poem!.
You are writing what comes to you mind very quickly!.
Remember to think of alternate words that draw the reader in!.!.!.

A suggestion, if I may!.!.!.!.!.
"They sweep me", instead of "they hold me"!.
Use "flirting with", instead of just "flirting"!.!.!.!.use of prepositions such as: with, without, behind, in front of, beneath, above, against will strengthen your poems!.
My favorite line from your poem is "Dreams sound in my ears"!. Very beautiful!.
Thank you for sharing!.

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I, personally, don't think that poems should be critiqued!. It is a reflection of a person!. It is feeling and meaning combined!.

I would like to say that I enjoyed your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com