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Question: My poem any good!? please!?
this is my poem-wroe it in about 5 minuites stillediting!. true feelings!. umm rate 1-10 please!. i am 12 almost 13 years old and in seventh grade
The Love Sick Child


The love sick child
the tickly tummy
with
the pen hiding
candy giving
answer-giving boy
The love sick child
is sick
with the tickly tummy
new friends with the
pen hiding
candy giving
answer-givng boy
The love sick child
is suffering
dont know what will blurt out
of her pretty little mouth
am i in sickness
or in heath!?
i think i like it
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Its good!. Its mysterious to an outsider!. I felt bad for the love sick child's suffering!. I hope she "blurts" out what is hurting her! *you*!.
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wow, fabulous!!
and whats with that king chicken!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

cute!? I guess!.Www@QuestionHome@Com