How is my poem that i had thought of?

Question: How is my poem that i had thought of!?

i love the nature
so fresh and clean
nothing to ruin it
of what i've seen

the trees are green
the flowers are fresh
with no brown leaves
well, still not yet

tulips are yellow
roses are red
with a beautiful scent
and more to be said

so many flowers
with trees and plants
the natures beautiful
and untouched
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hows my poem!. if i need any thing to add to it tell me ok
its called nature

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it has a rhythm and a beat throughout, and there is rhyming (or close to a rhyme - fresh/yet is close), until the last part!. maybe consider changing the last line, or restructuring the last stanza!?

"so many trees
and flowers
already in bloom
the beauty of nature
never arrives too soon"

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here's some constructive criticism,

it would help to know how old you are because depending on that his how advanced your writing is, other than that it is kind of boring and the choice of words, are very elementary, not very vivid, you don't paint me a picture!. its a good start thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think its good, but i mite change the last three lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com