Comment my poem please??? Give it a title?

Question: Comment my poem please!?!?!? Give it a title!?

yes, i'm sorry! i have't written a poem for ages!. i've been busy with homework, ahem hem

her we go!

She lies on a bed of roses,
Her autumn skin alight!.
A smile she imposes,
And whispers through the night!.

Her lover strokes her face,
And they share a solemn kiss!.
She pulls from the embrace,
Nothing else exists!.

With laughing eyes of green,
And long, protective arms!.
He moulds a loving scene,
All anxiousness he calms!.

The shadow of their lips,
Crush swiftly in the dark!.
He presses her narrow hips,
A new emotion they embark!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i would call it
"Trinity Girl"

not because of the matrix, but because trinity means a perfect resolved peace, and it may be between two people!.

I love your poem, and i hope you write more ^!.^Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW your poem is AMAZING! I think you are truly talented and the poem speaks volumes espcially the line, "she pulls from the embrace nothing else exists" that verse IMO is nice!.

keep writing, and thanks for commenting on my poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Lovers Path to Ascension

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ur poem is really gr8!

it reminds me of the time in 5th grade when i pooped in my pants!.

you can name it:
* when a bast@rd f(_)cked a bitc|-| *Www@QuestionHome@Com

Flesh and flowers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice

title
'A lovers embrace'Www@QuestionHome@Com

AWESOME poem your really good! I would name your poem Romantic Knight!.

yep so vote 4 meWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, only it's a little cliche!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's it!

Then what!?

"Heart Pedals"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awww this is a cute poem!. Or as my daughter says!.!.!.cutesie!Www@QuestionHome@Com

u may call it : The Dark Affair" Www@QuestionHome@Com