Question Home |
Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of this poem about african.i am more thank glad to see you comQuestion: What do you think of this poem about african!.i am more thank glad to see you comments please do!? help me with spelling and punctuation english is my 5th Language Why!? Why would you do such a thing!? Many of kind die for name But you toke them a way with in your self what a shame I am living a life of identity of shame You game me a skin a skin smeller to yours Today I am your son tomorrow I am you dictator When will I learn to actually love you!? You make it easy to hate, hard to love At the same my heart want let me Please stop with ur excuse I have to live, let me be!. ur kids crying ,women dieing Man’s sick-out of there mined Are u that cruel or just blind All you wealth taking by other others not like your kind in return you get weapons ,for your kind to fight eye for eye makes your kids blind!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: For English being your fifth language you didn't do to badly!. Let's see, Why would you call yourself a living identity of shame, that's not a good start!. You gave me a skin similar to yours!? Today I am your son!. Tomorrow I am your dictator!? I'm just wondering about this line!. At the same( time) my heart won't let me!. This next line I don't understand!. Your kids crying, women dying!. Man is sick of their mind!. Are you that cruel or just blind!? All your wealth is taken by others!. Not like your kind!. In return, you get weapons for your kind of fight!. An eye for an eye makes your kids blind!. The last line is powerful!. I like this last line!. The poem needs work!. I don't know if I could correct everything since I didn't know what you meant to say but you have a good idea going!. Keep trying and keep studying English!. It's one of the hardest languages to learn!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |