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Question: Does my poem sound good so far!?
it's titled best friend (:

We have been the best of friends,
From way before we could walk,
Our feelings we have always shared without the need to talk,

You've been there for me always,
Through the good times and the bad,
you'll be my Tweedle Dee,
And I'll be your Tweedle Dum,





Thats all I have so far!.!. does that sound good!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yes, it does SOUND good,it's funny!.so far*!.!.!.*!.keep at it !.if you can some how get in a personal joke!.that's only between You!.that would be cool!.he/she would like that i hopeWww@QuestionHome@Com

it sounds fine, but in poems you usually don't have mixed stanzas- another words you should have the same amount of lines in each stanza, you can't have 3 in one and 4 in another!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The 1st stanza's OK , but why do the last two lines degenerate into nursery rhyme !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

it sounds okay but let me tell you something I heard in my english class!. A Good poem doesn't always have to rime!. and that bad poems rime too much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nyah its ok sounds amateurish Www@QuestionHome@Com