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Question: Are you tired of waiting patiently!?
It died, they say,
it's a chaos carnival out there
they say it will never be
great again
but we get out
our hammers and build
our shitthouses with rubber nails
and say LOOK again, partner,
and they say
stop
salting the wound
nobody cares
about flowers that make you feel pain
or dead blood in a splayed vein
you don't know
anybody
they say
you don't have a voice
so you burn the institutions
to the ground
and say LOOK again
and they laugh and laugh and laugh!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sod 'em!. As we say in London!.
& bring them to their knees!. :)

I really felt this one!.
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Did Charles Bukowski write this!? Certainly he did!
"burn the institutions to the ground" cause he was told he didn't have a voice!? Yeah, he wrote this!. Gawd, I love him!
(I know you wrote it, just making a point)

ma

I know it has other (social) meanings, just those lines really spoke to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Patience is a virtue!. But!.!.!.virtues denied and assaulted with chaos, can surely make a better and stronger person!. Usually!.

When fools demolish institutions, they demolish what is always rebuilt stronger!
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"We sick an tired of-a your ism-skism game -
Dyin n goin to heaven in-a jesus name, lord!.
We know when we understand:
Almighty God is a living man!.
You can fool some people sometimes,
But you cant fool all the people all the time!.
So now we see the light (what you gonna do!? ),
We gonna stand up for our rights! (yeah, yeah, yeah!) "

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when the heart is injured
words smell bloody
forming rose colored
voice body
universally crushed
tortured
sourced Minnesota
echoed Tibet!.
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i really enjoyed that!. i love the starting line the most!.

please read mine, id like to kno ur opinion!.!.
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i am a patient of patience so im never tired of anything except greed and mistrust and hatred and liesWww@QuestionHome@Com

A flower or a blade of grass, or at least a weed will always find a way up through the cracks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

English!.

Born to queue!.

Damn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes but the alternative can defeat the purpose!.

The poem is fantasticWww@QuestionHome@Com

the iconoclasts!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.melted the rainbow down!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.with the death of a candlelight!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you are the voice in my eyes!. i am tired of being tired!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what the heck!? where are the poems about love, flowers, rainbows, puppies, beaches!.!.!.you know!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just once, would they laugh with me!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey, where can I get some of those rubber nails!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.!.!.now that you mention it!.!.!.

Standing O!Www@QuestionHome@Com