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Question: WHat do you think of these 4 lines i just wrote!?
Memories passing though my mind
The recollections of love, leaving me blind
Head tipped, a symbol of sorrow
My heart remains empty, untouched and hollow



i'm 15 and i just wrote this, not sure what it's about but!.!. yeah

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yeah!. I think they are 4 lines that rhyme!. With a bit of poetry, carry on, it will get there!. A lot of hyperbole!. Exaggerated form of speech! The relation between the object and the subject is too distant!.
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All poetry does not necessarily , have to be about Love and / or sorrow !. Try & describe feelings real to you , & it will flow as good poetry !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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