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turbidity, murkiness our eyes cannot see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ET is correct in it fitting the form of a senryu!.!.!.indeed it is more of an Americanized version of the haiku!.!.!.pertaining to human existence!. Although!.!.!.!.!. the reference to turbidity and murkiness are clearly traits that relate to water!. As the flocculated sedimentary deposit flows downstream, it meets head waters and suspends in the discharge, a state of turbidity exists, producing limited visibility!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I believe that this is a Senryu, the form of haiku, but haiku must strictly be about nature!. But my poetic knowledge of Japanese forms does not go that far!. Sorry I can't be of more help!. Love the content!. You're very poetic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com As a born polemic I say it's a con-verb!. Senses on stand by when **** hits the fan - blinding I can still hear truth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Japanese chokeku!. I think!. I hope this helped!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is a coo-ku!Www@QuestionHome@Com it is a hi or hai ku Im not really sure how you spell itWww@QuestionHome@Com id say its a HAIKUWww@QuestionHome@Com what!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |