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Question: Can you help me choose a title!?
i need a title for this
any ideas!?!?!?
So lets pretend that we’re all good again!.
When we know we aren’t!.
And people wondering just where you went!.
Because you left
With out goodbyes
With out the cries
Cause those dreams filled our nights,
And kept us alive
But did they ever mean a thing!?
Because this never seemed much easier
In letting you go,
Oh, why’d you have to go!?
Well, it never seemed much easier
Oh, remembering a friend
In our hearts you’ll live forever
In those dreams, we’ll keep you alive!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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The title, In Letting You Go,
Sort of reminds me of a poem written by Keats!.
Perhaps bring it back around to your beginning!.!.!. pretending you're good again!. also, try adding some imagery!.!.!. Keep working on it, its very emotive!.
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Five stages - as in the five stages of grief!. Denial, anger, bargaining, depression and acceptance!. It kind of follows those stages, but why not try to modify it a bit and make it fit those three!. That sounds awesome to me!.
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I would say Dreams!.Its plain and simple which is different!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Dreams
Forevermore
Immortal Life
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the last goodbye the final sayWww@QuestionHome@Com
dreaming of you
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Till we dream again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I like it!. i think "GONE" is a good title!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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